文/刘宝彩/天津
写英语思路又卡,句型又不会了,语法逻辑表达有问题了。总之写英语总是有一种挫败感。我本来很有趣的,希望自己有明显的进步,往往呢,事与愿违,仿佛是学到了一些写英语的 方法,可是一到写起来,不免又会出现这样那样的问题。写英语这件事儿弄得很复杂,甚至产生了放弃的念头。别急,很可能是以下这三种误导自己的行为造成的。
第一种,就是发现自己越写越不会写了。当代信息非常发达,五花八门的英语写作教学说法,和使用技术和表现,层出不穷。其实很多内容是好的,无论是出发点还是最终目标,都是要教你学生写好英语作文得高分,可是每个教学系统都有属于自己的核心教学理念。所以教学手法或者理念不同,如此一来,原来没有看过那些内容还好,看过之后反而不会写了。因为你写英语思维逻辑全乱了,就比如写英语思维作文,模仿着写还是按照英语思维原理写,最好的方法就是你要先了解他的教学核心理念。
第二种,就是写英语的数量不代表质量,你应该知道,英语思维原理写英语操作习惯的养成,它是需要时间的。需要大量时间去练习去体会,前提你要知道要在对的情况下大量去练习。在这里提醒你一下,预期花大量的时间去练习,不如花时间弄清楚英语思维写作原理后如何做,做对再去练习。想一想你现在练习写的那篇英语作文,你写不成功、不理想的那篇英语作文,你现在虽做不到理想,但知道该如何做到吗?如不知道,你还是只是抄“模板”套“范文”,甚至是拼上全部努力去呢?除此之外,就是在写作过程中没有明确的英语思维写作的目标,导致了你看不到自己的进步。
第三种,就是很多人写英语没词儿写,有词儿不知怎么写,只是不断地一味地抄“模板”——抄!抄!!抄!!!大多数学生喜欢写英语作文,想写好英语,就不断在网上搜罗模板甚至看“范文”,看一篇学一篇,照单全收,这也要做那也要做、乱做也痛。其实你要做的是化繁为简,接受自己的不足和一些小瑕疵,先解决英语思维的表达,再去解决英语写作的技术。今天练写一篇英语作文,你要先明确我要做到什么、怎么做。就比如我写英语作文的时候逻辑不足,思维不专一,那你就先不要理会其他的,今天这篇作文你就解决没词写的问题。每天的写英语练习只解决一个问题,简单的说,要想练英语作文有明显的进步和提高。先制定目标,越具体越好,然后清清楚楚的去执行,那你整个的学英语写作的过程就显得明朗而简单了。你如果不知道学习写英语从哪一步开始,如何一步一步的设定目标,进行清晰明确的练习,就学英语逻辑思维我的专栏,从写英语五法则:⑴一因一果、一因多果、多因一果和多因多果的英语思维相互转换法;⑵逻辑与词法与句法沟通法;⑶逻辑与“英语基本动词与变形句对接”沟通法;⑷学、用英语指南图法;⑸暗逻辑“战胜”明逻辑法的表达十节课,每节课练习三到五天,一站式解决英语作文的写作基础问题。大约两个月左右,你就具备了写作英语的基础,那你再写任何层级的英语作文时遇到问题,都会知道如何面对、如何去改进,让自己对写英语更有信心。大考生学写英语作文慢慢来,成绩会稳抓稳拿,进步就会比较快。
根据以上讲解,本文写作一篇英语作文,其背景提示如下:
晨光中学学习汉语的Chris同学给李津班长写信询问有关学习课程及气候等情况,为此请你以李津名义写回信给Chris。
April 04, 20__
Dear Chris,
I, Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven in Chen Guang High School write you an e-mail welcoming you as one of American exchange students to this school, Tianjin,China for you to take art-related course in this Class next term, according to the agreement reached by and between Sino-US educational authorities.
Becoming acquainted with the class, you are advised that there are fifty-four students consisting of 29 girls and 25 boys. In a week, three lessons are given on Chinese, four lessons inclusive of two on Chinese history and two on English, and five lessons on arts and one Math. Of course, PE lesson and song-singing one are to give students once a week respectively. The above-mentioned lessons are in the schedule from the school.
In the school, you will be expected to join some clubs in singing songs, playing football or basketball or delivering competitive speech in Chinese or in English, which makes it easy for you to get on kindly well with your fellows in China, and finds it helpful for you to establish and/or develop a friendly relationship further with them, I feel very sure to you.
You will be shown great kindness, in my opinion. This means that on serving you with Chinese traditional-food Noodle and JiaoZi, I will be able to get you interested in learning more about the local-food culture.
To do some sightseeing in and/or outside Tianjin city, of course, you are kindly invited to go here and there accordingly together with me either by bus or by taxi or train. This well helps you enjoy having a good trip to parts of the city during your holidays, I am sure.
Enabled to believe in living to the full well in China, you would be made known about more information on the climate in Tianjin city, where it is comfortable both in Spring and Autumn, I would say. In comparison with this, it is hot in summer but cold in winter. In the latte you are told to put on more clothes, I sincerely hope.
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
总结
在“不靠模板靠逻辑”的原理和标准下,英语写作质效突破了传统海量地“背模板套范文”写作英语的束缚,表现出:层次内容易推敲;思维逻辑不漏掉;使用词类范围巧;语言结构种类好。自然达到——稳抓稳拿成绩升!化繁为简写英语——之目的了。