
原题部分
六、书面表达(本题共20分)
假如你是某中学国际班班长于海,学校下周举办体育节,请各班结合团队运动(team sports)项目进行报名。请你根据以下信息,给同学们发一封电子邮件,号召大家积极报名(sign up)参加。
写作要点:
1.活动目的:丰富同学们的校园生活。
2.活动事宜
(1)运动项目:篮球、排球等。
(2)报名时间:不迟于本周五下午3点。
3.说一说中学生积极参加团队活动的益处。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear classmates,
I am glad to share something exciting with you.
Yours,
Yu Hai
答案部分
(以下范文是王老师亲自写的,转载请注明出处)
书面表达参考答案
Dear classmates,
I am glad to share something exciting with you. In order to enrich us students’ life experience, our school is going to hold a sports festival next week. I can promise you that it will be an excellent event, so I sincerely hope you can all join in it. The basketball game, the volleyball game and other ball games will be all included, so you will have a lot of fun. If you feel you are interested, please sign up for it before 3 o’clock pm this Friday.
As you may know, taking part in team sports can benefit us in many ways. First of all, team sports help us work well with others and promote teamwork. We all know that teamwork spirit is a very important skill and will significantly increases our chances of success, so joining in the sports festival cannot be a better way to achieve this goal. In addition, this activity will also help relieve our stress. In other words, doing sports can ease our tension and anxiety. When playing ball games with our classmates, we can always feel a sense of fulfillment and satisfaction.
My dear classmates, what are you waiting for? Join us and have fun.
Yours,
Yu Hai
讲评部分
本次作文,就起难度来说,应该说毫无难度。关于诸多类型活动的好处,我们平时就已经练过。比如学校活动,社会活动,慈善活动等等。但凡活动,论点和论据都大同小异,因此这个话题的可迁移性非常强,一定要重点掌握。
为了帮助大家,更好储备表达,我又增写了两点好处,仅供参考。
It is good exercise and we do need it. Since the outbreak of Covid-19, we have long been stuck on the Internet. We can hardly see each other face to face, let alone playing together. Therefore, this school event can provide us with a great chance to see each other and do exercise together.
Another great part about playing team sports is that it really helps us develop social skills. If we choose to play on a team, it means we are expected to work with others and learn to get along with others. This is also a chance to meet new people and make friends with them. Therefore, Through interactions with others,we will build social circles and feel more included.
扩展资源
- enrich one's knowledge and experience 丰富经历
- relaxone's body and mind 放松身心
- refresh one's mind放松心灵
- relieve tension and anxiety解除紧张和焦虑
- increase the pleasure of life增加生活的乐趣
- make one’s life more meaningful and colorful让生活丰富多彩
- have a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment有一种满足感和收获感
- learn to get along with others学会与人相处
- develop social skills 培养社交能力
- explore one’s interests and talents 激发某人的兴趣与潜能
- these things all play very important roles in students’ future work and life.这些对学生今后工作和生活起到很重要的作用
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作者: 王兴刚老师(公众号|头条号|抖音号:王老师英语教学),英语教师,从事教学16年。本号日常推文主要包括:初高中英语知识的梳理和剖析,中高考英语考点的讲解与总结。推文主要面向中高考学生,每日分享学生们能够实实在在用得到的英语知识,特别适合双减后能够独立学习的初高中生!