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词语的修改
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学术研究特别重视文章中研究的严谨性，但我们生活中经常出现一些口语化的学术语言，甚至正规的学术场合也存在其身影。论文写作过程中的口语化主要是由于大家日积月累的表达习惯造成的，那么我们如何有效的解决这个问题呢？
Academic research pays special attention to the rigor of research in articles, but some colloquial academic language often appears in our lives, even in formal academic occasions. The colloquialism in the writing process of the thesis is mainly caused by everyone's accumulated expression habits, so how can we effectively solve this problem?
首先我们需要去避免段落中一些不正确的词语使用：
第一，尽可能少用“应该……”、“必须……”、“要……”、“让……”等绝对性话语。学者的本分是靠证据说话过分的绝对会破坏文章的严谨性。
第二，尽可能少用“…的本质差别在于”、“…的本质特征是”以及类似的话语。本质是一个难以定义的存在，不可轻飘飘地、口无遮拦地把“本质”说出来。
第三，尽可能少用“正如…指出”、“正如….所说”等话语。无论某个名人说出了什么名言，他的名言都不能用来论证某个结论是否成立。论证是否有效，只能有两个路径：要么采用实证的归纳的路子，要么采用先验的演绎的路子。
第四，尽可能少用或不用“一针见血地指出”、“正确地指出”、“深刻地指出”等带有强价值判断的词语。
第五，尽可能少用“无庸质疑”、“毋庸讳言”、“不可否认"、“应该说"、“显而易见”、“显然”、“众所周知”、“不言而喻”以及类似的口水话语。在学术研究领域，几乎没有什么结论是不能怀疑、质疑的。
第六，尽可能少用“我们认为”、“大家一致认为”。如果学术论文中频繁出现“我认为”或“笔者认为”，则可能该研究没什么学术含量或学术精神。
第八，尽可能少说“值得一提的是”、“特别值得说明的是”、“值得注意的是”、“要补充说明的是”。这些说法当然是有意义的，它提醒读者注意后面的解释。但是，难道只有后面的解释才是“值得一提的"，而前面的解释就“不值一提”、“不值得注意"？所谓“值得一提的是”，其实只是一个补充说明。而且，即便要补充说明，也没必要强调“要补充说明的是”，只需用“此外”、“另外”，就可以说出自己的补充。
First of all we need to avoid some incorrect words in the paragraph:
First, use as few absolute words as "should...", "must...", "shall...", "let..." and so on. It is a scholar's duty to rely on evidence to speak too much, which will definitely undermine the rigor of the article.
Second, use as little as possible "the essential difference of ... is", "the essential characteristic of ... is" and similar words. Essence is an existence that is difficult to define, and the "essence" cannot be spoken lightly and openly.
Third, use words such as "as pointed out" and "as stated" as little as possible. No matter what a famous person said, his famous words cannot be used to prove whether a conclusion holds. There are only two paths to whether an argument is valid: either the empirical inductive approach or the a priori deductive approach.
Fourth, words with strong value judgments such as "point to the point", "point out correctly" and "point out profoundly" should be used as little or no as possible.
Fifth, use as little as possible "no doubt", "no secret", "undeniable", "should say", "obvious", "obvious", "well known", "self-evident" and similar slurs . In the field of academic research, there are few conclusions that cannot be questioned or questioned.
Sixth, use "we think" and "everyone agree" as little as possible. If "I think" or "I think" appears frequently in academic papers, the research may have little academic content or spirit.
Eighth, say as little as possible "it's worth mentioning", "it's worth mentioning", "it's worth noting" and "it's worth explaining it". These statements are certainly meaningful, and they alert the reader to the explanations that follow. However, is it only the latter explanation that is "worthy of mention", while the former explanation is "not worth mentioning" and "not worth mentioning"? The so-called "it's worth mentioning" is actually just a supplementary explanation. Moreover, even if you want to supplement, you don't need to emphasize "what you want to supplement", you only need to use "in addition" and "in addition", you can say your supplement.
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段落的衔接
1.连接词
中文发表论文的撰写中，连接词的用法（及使用范围）和英语几乎一致，一般要求同一段2个独立句间或2个有逻辑连接的自然段间需要使用连接词表明逻辑连接。
2.（人称）代词
中英一致，一般规则为尽量回避第一人称，不使用第二人称，多重定语时慎用代词，忌连续使用代词，易引发误解。
3.多元素衔接
（1）多个元素的罗列时，最后两个元素间必须以“及”连接。
（2）多个元素的罗列时，即使已罗列完，也必须加上“等”字。
1. Conjunctions
In the writing of papers published in Chinese, the usage (and scope of use) of connectives is almost the same as in English. Generally, it is required to use connectives to indicate logical connections between two independent sentences in the same paragraph or between two natural paragraphs with logical connections.
2. (personal) pronouns
Chinese and English are the same. The general rule is to avoid the first person as much as possible, not to use the second person, to use pronouns with caution when multiple attributives are used, and to avoid using pronouns consecutively, which is easy to cause misunderstandings.
3. Multi-element connection
(1) When listing multiple elements, the last two elements must be connected by "and".
(2) When multiple elements are listed, even if they have been listed, the word "etc" must be added.
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英文语句修改同样重要
最后我们来讨论一下有关英文作文当中常出现的问题：
1.不要出现let、put、get、to be、to have、can、could这一类单词。这类词的特点是没有具体含义，在口语中比较常见。
2.尽量避免there be句型。
3.尽量不要用缩写。etc.、and so on、and so forth这些都是常用的缩写。可以选择including、and other ....等句式来表达省略。
4.表示否定不只有isn’t。可以选择yield no..../little/few/hardly这些具有否定意义的单词，不仅避免了缩写，也会让文笔显得更好一些。
5.注意句首！中国作者最常放在句首的词包括：actually，as we all know，in fact，in my opinion.....这些词/短语建议直接删掉；but可以换成however，so可以换成as a result/consequence/therefore等。
Finally, let's discuss some common problems in English writing:
1. Do not use words like let, put, get, to be, to have, can, could. These words are characterized by no specific meaning and are more common in spoken language.
2. Try to avoid the there be sentence pattern.
3. Try not to use abbreviations. etc., and so on, and so forth are common abbreviations. You can choose including, and other .... and other sentences to express omission.
4. Indicates that negation is not only isn’t. You can choose words with negative meanings such as yield no..../little/few/hardly, which not only avoids abbreviations, but also makes the writing look better.
5. Pay attention to the beginning of the sentence! The words most often placed at the beginning of sentences by Chinese authors include: actually, as we all know, in fact, in my opinion.....These words/phrases are suggested to be deleted directly; but can be replaced with how, so can be replaced with as a result/consequence/therefore etc.
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