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考研江湖流传一句话:得阅读者得天下,失作文者失江山。

最后50天,要想把作文分数拿到手,

做到两个方面即可,

一是写作思路,二是经典写作模板。

时间宝贵,就不多说废话了,直接上干货。

1、先总结下近十年来的真题作文,摸清考试规律

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

英语一近十年真题题型

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

英语二近十年真题题型

从上图可以看出,英语一英语二的小作文大部分都是私人和公务信函,告示类只有三次,所以大家主要背私人和公务信函模板,告示类背一两篇就可以了

大作文个人品质、教育、旅游文化和时事热点比较多(后面会分享各主题模板),其中社会热点大家留心5G(科技类)、垃圾分类(环保类)、建国70周年的变化等热门话题

2、作文评分标准

大、小作文的评分都有不同的侧重点

考研英语作文想要多拿分,就得踩得分点,熟悉作文评分的原则和方法

小作文(A 节):应用文的评分侧重点在于信息点的覆盖、内容的组织、语言的准确性及格式和语域的恰当。对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题作调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词,但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。

大作文(B 节):大作文的评分重点在于内容完整性、文章的组织连贯性、语法结构和词汇的多样性及语言的准确性。

3、构建写作思路

NO.1 首段

首段 “骨肉相连”描图三步走

1. 骨架+小肉(整体描图)(小肉为整体描图,不要描述细节;)

2. 多汁大肉(详细描图)(多汁大肉为细节描述,灵活使用从句、分词以及修饰词让描图丰满;)

3. 翻译中文/万能句型(万能句型属于无奈之举,根据前两句的字数来确定是否使用。)

例如: 2003年

1. 骨架+小肉:

Depicted in these two cartoons above is a flower showing different states in two entirely distinct conditions.

写作要点

此句开篇,结构至关重要,此处用倒装句描图,Depicted in these two cartoons above is+图片核心元素+分词短语修饰。

2. 多汁大肉:

As is shown in the first picture, the flower, placed in a comfortable greenhouse which shelters it from the threatening storm, is in full bloom. On the contrary, when exposed to the heavy rain, the flower soon fades and withers, with petals falling on the ground.

写作要点

As is shown in the first picture在所有的模板书均可找到,因此千万不要放在第一句,但是如此漂亮的As引导的定语从句不用岂不可惜,因此调整顺序,放在第二句即可,显示出你支配语言的能力。2003年为两幅图(今年的重点复习方向),因此要注意两幅图之间的对比关系,用on the contrary强调句间关系。其中分词作状语、定语从句、独立主格皆可以用于其他文章,举一反三。

例如:2004年

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

第一步:审图。

图片的核心元素为一个小男孩儿/小女孩儿,当然性别并不重要,年轻人也没问题,他在跑道上奔跑,这些便是第一句整体描图的内容。细节信息为:跑道上标着终点的地方也有两个字“起点”,图画下面的标题为:终点又是新起点,比较好翻译。

第二步:开写。

1. 骨架+小肉:Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that a young man is running on the road to the future, with sweat pouring down from his face.

请写作要点

骨架模板“Emerging from the cartoon is an eye-catching scene that…”,此处 eye-catching可以替换为其他词汇;小肉为“主谓宾+独立主格”的模式,只要图片内容为 “路”,均可使用“running on the road to the future”来表示。

2. 大肉:After a long journey, he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line, but straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new starting point urging him to continue rushing to the next destination.

写作要点

这句话为详细描图,可以使劲浑身解数让句子变长。练习时需要先确定句子的主干he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line,but 后面为倒装句,真正的主语为a sign, 目的是与后面的which引导的定语从句相连,这类倒装句在表示“在什么地方有什么东西”时可以通用。“urging him to continue rushing to the next destination”为分词做后置定语修饰前面名词point。

3. 翻译中文:The caption in the drawing reads “a terminal point is also the departure point”。

写作要点

如果第二句写的不够长,则可以用第三句补充。

特别提醒:平时的描图练习要尽量做到“绞尽脑汁”扩充句子,比如平时练习能够写80字,估计考场上紧张过后就只剩40了,删词总比增词容易。

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

No.2 中间段

多准备一些万能模板句,做到以不变应万变,考场上只需要替换某一些主题词汇就可以拿分,记住:

考研英语写作不怕假大空,就怕犯低级错误,以个人品质为例,下面的模板就属于放之四海皆准。

1. 提出中心:The implication of this cartoon can be summarized as a philosophic topic in daily life: XXX is the first step towards success.

2. 解释说明:In other words, facing with delicate options, we had better march forward rather than hesitate. Indeed, if we are bewildered with the choices, opportunities may escape our attention.

3. 举例论证:For some people, their fear to lose is greater than their desire to succeed, so they end up doing nothing and their dreams become impossible.

4. 正反论证:On the contrary, at any given moment, we have the power to say this is not how the story is going to end. Our braveness, perseverance, and decisiveness may earn us chances to solve current adversities, leading us out of the shadow.

5. 总结中心:Clearly, the cartoonist, through this unique metaphor, encourages us to choose the latter.

No.3 结尾段

确保高大上,准备两类结尾:积极正向+消极负向

积极正向:Evidently, there are reasons to believe that主题词 can produce positive effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to promote international tourism.

消极负向:Evidently, there are reasons to believe that 主题词can produce negative effects on economic growth and local government should be encouraged to avoid such phenomenon.

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

模板?反模板?

说起模板,大家一定会想到,在考研阅卷现场会出现反模板的倾向。但这个反模板,并不是反对所有模板,而是反对那些千篇一律的模板。

下面给大家分享一些经典模板(提前加入自己的话术配合使用效果更佳)

万能金句:

1.With the rapidly growing popularity of …,the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.

句型翻译:随着……流行程度/普及程度的快速增长,我们的生活质量也被显著改变。

例句:With the rapidly growing popularity of computers in China,the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.

例句翻译:随着中国计算机的快速普及,我们的生活质量也得到了显著的改变。

2.Recently,sth./the problem of…has been brought to popular attention/has become the focus of public concern.

句型翻译:最近,……(的问题)已经被带进广泛大众的视野之中/成为公众关注的焦点

例句:Recently,the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.

例句翻译:近日,失业问题已如此广泛地被公众所关注,以至于各层级的政府都将其视作第一要务列于日程之中。

3.With the development of…,more and more people come to realize that…

句型翻译:随着……的发展,越来越多的人开始意识到……

例句:With the development of high education,more and more people come to realize that knowledge plays a role of extreme importance in modern society.

例句翻译:随着高等教育的发展,越来越多的人开始意识到,知识在现代社会中扮演者一个极其重要的角色。

http://4.In the past few years,there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…

句型翻译:在过去的几年中,……经历了一个大繁荣时期/急速增长/下降;

例句:In the past few years,there has been a decline in the number of species.

例句翻译:在过去的几年中,物种数量经历了减少的状况。

5.It is a traditional practice to…in our society.

句型翻译:……是我们社会的传统(方式/做法)

例句:It is a traditional practice for young people to be financially dependent on their parents for anything like marriage and housing.

例句翻译:在结婚、住房等等这类事上,年轻人在经济上依赖父母,这属于一个传统做法。

考研英文作文的技巧和方法,还在为学习英语而困扰

好的句型

1.The cartoon vividly shows an important truth that…

漫画生动地揭示了一个重要的道理

2.As is vividly depicted in the drawings

漫画生动地描述

3.Clearly, the cartoon reveals a very common problem in our society

很明显,漫画揭示了我们社会的一个普遍现象

4.The implied meaning of the drawings is that

漫画的寓意是

5.As is manifested in the cartoon

如漫画所示

6.The two drawings stand in a sharp contrast

两幅图形成了鲜明的对比

7.A ridiculous situation

一个可笑的场景

8.To grasp the full implication

充分理解寓意

9.With sweats trailing down the face

汗流满面

10.There is no denying that…

毋庸置疑……

11.There is a general assumption that

人们普遍认为

12.To make careful decision

认真做决定

13.It is quite obvious that

很明显

14.To draw our attention to

关注

15.Upcoming

即将来临的

16.Beyond one’s comprehension

无法理解

17.To be deprived of

被剥夺

18.Few people could pay attention to…

关注……的人寥寥无几

19.We can often encounter a scene where

我们经常碰到……的现象

20.Commit a terrible blunder

犯下严重错误

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