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TOPIC

热点话题 六: 工作与健康

有人说,大部分人30岁之前用健康换钱,30岁之后用钱换健康。想想确实如此,无论是90后、80后还是70后,都拼命地工作,拼命地赚钱,也拼命地忽视自己的健康,或许还没等到退休之时,身体已经被击垮了。这样真的好吗?

重点表达

身心健康 physical and mental health

身心健康的 physically and mentally healthy

工作狂 workaholic

事业心 initiative to pursue career success

加班加点 to work overtime/ extra shifts

养家糊口 to support one's family

颈椎病 cervical vertebra disease

体育锻炼 physical exercise

健身房/馆 gym/fitness center

退休 retire(in one's old age)

写作思路

这一话题可看作“理想与现实”的衍生话题。很多年轻人为了事业拼命工作,忽视了健康,这一现象在中国及其他发展中国家非常普遍。如果考研英语作文考査这个话题,其漫画可能是描绘一个年轻的工作狂一边熬夜加班,一边吃药物维持精力的图片(办公桌的某处摆满了装药的瓶瓶罐罐)。考生在描述完漫画后,应当指出其反映的社会现象:不少年轻人为了工作而牺牲健康。

在中间段,考生可以分析这一现象的成因。一方面,年轻人,尤其是男性,普遍有事业心;另一方面,有些人好面子,攀比心理严重,希望自己是人中龙凤,而要做到这一点,就必须努力工作,这样的想法是根深蒂固的。二三十岁的年轻人正值壮年,身体器官出现问题或存在隐患要等到10年或20年后才体现出来,所以他们并不重视身体,继续卖命工作,“扛过去”。

在最后一段中,考生可以给这些人提出一些建议。身体是革命的本钱,没有好的身体,工作也会力不从心,所以应该平衡工作与健康之间的关系,既要认真工作,又不能损害身体健康,要对自己的健康和未来负责任。

高分范文

If there were a list of the most popular topics in people's daily lives, work and health must be within the top ten. In China, at reunion dinners or parties, asking about one's work and health condition is a common approach to breaking ice. On college campuses, Juniors and seniors exchange plans of career development and body building every now and then. Also, during a blind date, individuals talk about each other's job and health more than any other topic.

After all, job and health largely affect one's happiness. Without a decent, well-paying job, people cannot afford to travel abroad, send children to study abroad, or buy parents health care. Likewise, without a good health condition, people are unlikely to enjoy what they have earned through hard work.

When conflict occurs between climbing the career ladder and maintaining health, many, however, choose the former. That is why we see a number of 20-year-olds work until night or even through the night. Sometimes, we also notice that some young employee attending parties decide to leave early after receiving a call from employers who need them at the office immediately.

Are they fools? Some say yes, because they sacrifice health for work, while others say no. because most of them know that they are making such sacrifice and that they can make it up when standing out in their fields. From my point of view, health is no less important than work; a man with poor health can hardly finish his work, yet another man with good health can always find a job as long as he tries.

参考译文

如果有“每日最受人们欢迎的话题”这样一个清单,排名前十之中必定有“工作”和“健康”这两项。在中国,酒桌和聚会上相互问工作和健康状况是常用的破冰方法。在大学校园里,低年级学生和高年级学生经常交换职业发展和健身方面的心得。在男女相亲中,人们聊得更多的话题也是彼此的工作和健康。

毕竟,工作和健康在很大程度上影响人的幸福。没有一个体面而高薪的工作,人们无法担负起出国游、送孩子出国读书、给父母买保健品的费用等。同样,没有好的身体,人们也无法享受通过辛苦工作换来的成果。

然而,当职业晋升和保持身体健康发生冲突时,很多人选择了前者。这就是为什么我们看到很多20多岁的人工作到深夜甚至通宵。有时,我们也注意到,有些参加聚会的年轻人因为接到领导的电话,要求他们立即回到办公室,而决定提前离场。

是他们愚蠢吗?有人说是,因为他们为了工作而牺牲健康;也有人说不是,因为他们中大部分人觉得现在所做的牺牲在他们出人头地之时可以弥补回来。在我看来,健康与工作同样重要。身体欠佳的人很难完成工作;而身体健康的人只要去找,总可以找到工作。

写作最后:

每一份素材的积累过程,就是唯一的“套路”。

它的本质是去除机会主义,是想方设法在考场遇到相关话题时,用你平时训练的素材去建立关联。

庆幸,我们生活在社会主义和谐社会,考试也是有核心价值观的。

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