写作题参考范文赏析
上外考研英语语言文学专业课二写作与汉译英中，都是会考一篇不少于500字的议论文，占该门专业课总分的一半，相当重要。在备考过程中，很多同学可能对议论文写作模式和备考策略不太熟悉。下面给宝儿们分享一篇写作练习的范文，以及对这篇作文的简单评析，看一下这篇作文完成的怎么样：
题考策略考范文举例
作文题目：
A Major Problem Resulted From Digital Divide
参考范文：
In recent years, although the majority of all countries especially the post-industrial societies, have achieved preeminent progress thanks to the widespread of personal computer and Internet, this trend also resulted in large groups of poor, underprivileged and disadvantaged people who lack in computer skills. Such groups have limited access to the information age and are identified below the Digital Divide. These people find it difficult to find a decent job, and many of them are likely to turn to drugs and crimes. In a word, this tendency has created many social problems, namely unemployment, crime, drug abuse, disparity between the rich and the poor, and so on. I think the most important element among them is crime.
The Digital Divide functions on two levels, namely the domestic level and the international level. On the domestic level, when it comes to other negative effects accompanied by the emergence of Digital Divide such as unemployment and drug abuse, some people may adopt an inappropriate perspective that they are not affected by these problems and show no interest in solving them. Regardless of the political correctness of such opinions, the devastating effects of crimes closely associate with all those in the society and allow of no neglect. If we don't put this issue under scrutiny, our lives and properties will naturally suffer great loss as a result and this issue virtually serves the function of a trigger of dissatisfaction among the people. Furthermore, since the computer skills are necessary in our routine jobs, those computer illiterate will be disappointed to find they are not qualified to have an upper hand in the job market. They have no choice but to commit crimes as a means of earning their bread as well as revenging on the society.
On the international level, people in underdeveloped countries will lament that their situation is worse than before since the advent of the personal computer and Internet, whose original purpose is , ironically, to provide convenience as well as efficiency to all human beings instead of causing social and economical gaps between rich and poor countries. To make it worse, radicals from some underdeveloped countries will attribute their plight to the exploitation and oppression inflicted by developed countries aided by advanced technology. Consequently, they are entitled to take an extreme form of crime, namely terrorist attacks launched against Western countries,
as they deserve the punishment.
If the digital technology continues to develop at the expense of those beneath the Digital Divide and the underdeveloped countries do not take an active approach to the problems, even well educated computer literates in developed countries will not enjoy their lives devoid of a sense of security. To eliminate all crimes caused by the Digital Divide, all governments should provide the underclass with educational and financial provision, which in turn generates possible job opportunities. Meanwhile, developed countries should provide unconditional economic, financial, technological aids for poor countries to help them build infrastructure and purchase equipment so that they can take advantage of current technology.
作文解析
文章的题目是“A Major Problem Resulted From Digital Divide”，即数字鸿沟造成的主要问题。在当代社会，数字鸿沟(即不同人群对互联网的获取程度有所差异)导致一系列如犯罪、失业、贫富差距等社会问题，考生应该就其中一个问题展开论述。
参考范文在论证思路和词汇方面可圈可点。文章的词汇丰富，句式多样，体现了英文词汇多样性的特点。文章说理和假设论证结合，层层递进，论证严密，论证角度多样化。
此外，值得学习的是，参考范文的框架非常清楚，符合规范，不管是全文的结构还是段落内部结构都很清楚。首段遵循“引出话题+表明观点”的模式展开，先说明当今存在的“数字鸿沟”现状和导致的一些问题，然后提出点明本文将围绕犯罪这一话题展开。第二段首句是中心句，说明数字鸿沟导致犯罪在国内和国际两个维度都有所体现。第二第三段就是围绕这句话展开的，思路十分清晰，“on the domestic level”和“on the international level”两个关键词切分文章的框架。最后一段总结全文，并从政府和发达国家的角度提出应对策略，这也是一般问题类文章的尾段写作模式。
写作题备考的几点建议
议论文的参考书推荐可以参考GRE/SAT/雅思/专八相关的书籍，议论文的写作是相通的，可以多看看，相互借鉴。
议论文写作训练过程中要注意积累一些万能素材。从上面分享的参考书中总结一些例子，特别是可以用在很多话题上的例子，在平时训练过程中注意灵活运用，把这些例子用在作文中，用的熟练一些，考试才能游刃有余。
语言在议论文的写作中同样重要，首先是要保证语法的正确，议论文写出来的句子一定是要语法正确，意义完整的句子。精读的文章可以促进议论文语言的提升，把精读中出现的优美的表达和句型用到自己的作文中，让自己的文章富有美感，拥有多变的词汇和句型。
最后，议论文的写作一定要注意逻辑和论证。写完一篇文章一定要看看文章的分论点有没有说服力。在每一段段内论证的时候，多想想自己的例子能不能证明自己的观点，自己的说理有没有逻辑问题。
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