在这篇文章中,张老师继续带领大家了解四级作文青睐的高分词汇。
我们以2017年12月大学英语四级作文为例。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short easy on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
这是一篇关于如何更好地处理医患关系的作文。下面的段落论述了一种可以用于缓解医患关系的方法。
The main method is to strengthen the communication between doctors and patients. This can be done by giving the public more chances to familiarize themselves with the practices of doctors. For example, hospitals could hold regular open days, during which visitors are able to communicate with doctors about medical facilities available, existing medical policies, their expertise as well as their views on professional ethics, etc. These activities will undoubtedly improve the trust of patients in doctors and make them feel more secure. (82 words)
在大学英语四级(CET 4)作文:究竟该使用怎样的词汇才能拿高分一文中,我已经说过,四级作文青睐的词汇是与写作的话题有关的词汇(Topic-related vocabularies)。
在上面的段落中,我们可以发现大量使用了与doctors and patients 有关的词汇,具体如下:
- strengthen the communication between doctors and patients 加强医生与患者的沟通
- giving the public more chances to familiarize themselves with the practices of doctors 给公众更多的机会了解医生的日常工作
- hospitals could hold regular open days 定期举行开放日活动
- communicate with doctors 与医生沟通
- medical facilities available, existing medical policies, their expertise as well as their views on professional ethics 现有的医疗设施、医疗政策、医生的专业技能以及他们对职业道德的看法等
- improve the trust of patients in doctors 增强病人对医生的信任感
- make them feel more secure 让病人更加具有安全感
这些词汇并没有多么的高大上,但却紧扣主题,使得段落的内容十分的丰满。
大家能将这些词汇运用到自己的作文中吗?