2022届新高考英语考前复习写作通关练（4）
1. 假定你是新华中学的学生李华,上周*你日**不慎把书包遗失在操场上,里面有学生证、手机、钱包等物品。本校外教 Mr. Smith 捡到后上交给学校。请你用英语给他写一封感谢信,内容如下:
(1)表示感谢;
(2)回顾丢失和找到的过程;
(3)再次表达感谢。
词数80左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When I was about 12, I had an enemy, a girl who liked to point out my shortcomings. Week by week, little by little, her list grew: I was very thin; I wasn't a good student; I talked too much; I was too proud; I didn't like to help others; I didn't finish my homework; I didn't care for anyone and so on. I tried to hear all these as long as I could. At last, I became very angry. And I was too upset and didn't know what to do next. I felt I was the worst girl in the world. Life was hard for me at that time. I ran to my father with tears in my eyes for help.
He listened to me quietly, and then he asked, "Are the things she said true or not? Janet, didn't you ever wonder what you're really like? Well, you now have that girl's opinion. That is a good thing. Go and make a list of everything she said and mark the points that are true. Pay no attention to the other things she said. That is OK."
Then I did as my father told me. To my great surprise, I discovered that about half of the things she said to me were true. Some of them I couldn't change (like being very thin), but a good number of the things I could—and suddenly I wanted to change. For the first time I go to fairly clear picture of myself. I never feel upset now.
I brought the list back to Daddy. He refused to look at it. I felt very surprised.
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"That's just for you," he said.
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Daddy's advice has returned to me at many important moments.
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3. 假定你叫李华,现为武汉大学物理系四年级学生,今年二十一岁。从报纸上获悉广州华南电脑公司正在招聘职员(clerk)。请你给该公司经理王先生写一封求职信。信中内容包括:
1. 写信的原因;
2. 介绍自己的姓名、年龄、健康状况;各门功课好,擅长计算机;英语也很好,常阅读英文科技书籍和《中国日报》,能与外国人交谈;
3. 如能如愿,不胜荣幸,定为公司努力工作;
4. 盼望及时回信。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
A few years ago, I was taking up a part-time summer job at a local ice cream shop. While handing an ice cream to an old woman at the drive-through window, I noticed that she had a box of what appeared to be purple(紫色的) tomatoes.(If you’ve ever had a drive-through job, you know that it’s hard not to look into someone’s car when you are near from his or her face.) That’s when I felt the desire coming on. I felt that I was eager to explore(探索) what they exactly were. But I just didn’t know how to start my exploration. Would she refuse my curiosity(好奇) directly or just keep silent, even with a look of disgust?(厌恶)
After a struggle in my heart, I decided to encourage myself to grasp(抓住) the last minute. As I handed her the ice cream, I said, “Those tomatoes look delicious! What kind are they?”
She smiled and I thought she was about to start laughing, but instead she replied, “Here, have some!” Within seconds I had a handful of splendid purple tomatoes.“ Oh, no, you don’t need to give me any!” I said. Those tomatoes looked expensive. “Here have more,” she insisted, and I had six of the fattest, prettiest tomatoes I had ever seen. I weakly tried to protest(反抗): “Really, you didn’t have to give me any, but I appreciate it.”
The woman smiled again and said, “I hope you enjoy them. And to answer your question: It’s an heirloom breed(传家宝品种) that my mom used to plant. So they aren’t like the ones you get in grocery store.”
I thanked her again, and she sped off. She was like an adult version of the tooth fairy:(牙仙) I gave her ice cream and she gave me tomatoes.
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About two weeks later, a box of vegetables was dropped off in my office.
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I decided to accept her invitation(邀请) to visit her vegetable garden.
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5. 假如你是学生会主席李华,你的同学Van打算暑假回国,正考虑为他妈妈带些中国特色的礼物,特发信息向你征求建议。请根据以下内容用英语给Van回封邮件。内容要点:
1. 建议选择的礼物:旗袍、中国结等;
2. 说明选择这些礼物的原因;
3. 表达祝福和问候。
注意:
1.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯;
2.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:旗袍Chi-pao 中国结Chinese knot
Dear Van,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Aram and Rossi’s Bakery
Walking along the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath. The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee, coming from Rossi’s Italian Bakery. He was almost there.
Aram still couldn’t believe his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobs—waiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual baker’s assistant. doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his future career. Rossi’s Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start.
Ah, here he was—the bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read “Rossi’s Bakery.” Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs Rossi was sitting at the counter, looking old and wise. Aram greeted her and stuck out his hand(试题)http://www.huadizhixue.com. Mrs Rossi looked at it for a second before turning around and waving him inside. “I’m ready to learn everything,” Aram said.
“Great. Let’s start with the cash register,” Mrs Rossi said, “because that’s what you’ll be doing.” She showed him how to use the cash register. It wasn’t hard. The pastry trays were all marked by price, and there weren’t that many choices anyway. “That’s it?” Aram said, his heart sinking. “But when do we bake?”
“Bake? I order wholesale now. No more baking. I’m too old.” Then Mrs Rossi silently held up her hands. Aram took in her knotted, swollen fingers, and he understood. A wave of disappointment struck him. Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that he couldn’t think of a word to say.
He sighed, and Mrs Rossi sighed, too. “I used to bake it all. Bread and cakes. And no one did it better than me. But that was when these things worked,” said Mrs Rossi holding up her hands once more and glancing across the shelves filled with empty bottles labelled with names of the various ingredients (配料) she once used. Suddenly she came alive, waving her arthritic (关节炎的) hands. “People used to line up around the corner. Everyone wanted my baked bread.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then a thought occurred to Aram that he could ask Mrs Rossi to teach him. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mrs Rossi finally said, “Let’s buy the ingredients first.” _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7. 假定你是某校高一(六)班学生李萍,学校英语社团(the English club)现在要招募新成员,你有意参加该社团。请用英文给社长Johnson写一封信,简单介绍一下自己。
内容提示如下:
1.写信的目的(愿意参加);
2.个人情况介绍(兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.阅读下面短文, 根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构成一个完整的故事。
At the end of the class, Mr. Smith announced our assignment for the next Monday was to talk about someone we were grateful to instead of a book report. Upon hearing it, I couldn’t help complaining to Mareya that I was so nervous about having to talk in front of the whole class.
“You’ve been in at least three plays,” Mareya pointed out. “If you don’t get stage fright in front of those big audiences, why are you bothered by a few kids in our class?”
It was true, but in a play you were part of a group. I shook my head. Plus, there were so many people I was grateful to. There was no way I could possibly pick just one. Plus, even if I picked one I’d have no idea what to say. Plus, even if I figured out what to say, I was a million-percent positive I’d mess up if I tried to say it out loud! I’d be standing there with everyone staring at me, waiting for words to come out of my mouth. “Oh, my goodness!” I pulled my sweatshirt hood (兜帽) over my face, put my hands over my ears and said, “I don’t want to talk about it!”
But one thing about really good friends who knew you really well was that they didn’t always do exactly what you asked them to. Mareya could be pretty pushy talking of being helpful. She scribbled (潦草地写) something on a piece of paper, lifted my hood, and smiled. She’d drawn a funny elephant with the word BREATHE coming out of its trunk.
“This is Franky, the Everything’s-Going-to-Be-All-Right elephant.” Mareya giggled. She held the picture up to her ear and asked, “What’s that you say, Franky? You think my friend Arizona should come over to my house this weekend so we can work on our talks together?”
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On Monday morning, however, I decided to talk about Mareya. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案以及解析
1.答案：
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I'm writing this letter to thank you for returning my schoolbag.(表示感谢)
Last Sunday afternoon, after I played basketball with my friends in the playground, I left my schoolbag there owing to my carelessness. I was worried because my student's ID card, cellphone, wallet and some documents were all in it, which are very important to me. 【高分句型一】Just as I was at a loss, I was informed that my schoolbag was at the school's Lost and Found, where I knew it was you who had picked up my schoolbag and handed it in.(回顾丢失和找到的过程)
It's such a great kindness that I'm extremely grateful to you. 【高分句型二】You did set a good example to us.(再次表达感谢)
Yours,
Li Hua
2.答案：
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"That's just for you," he said. "You know better than anyone else the truth about yourself. But you have to learn to listen, not just close your ears, feeling angry and upset. When something someone said about you is true, you'll find it will be of help to you. Our world is full of people who think they know your duty. Don't shut your ears. Listen to them all, but hear the truth and do what you know is the right thing."
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Daddy's advice has returned to me at many important moments. In my life, I've never had a better piece of advice. Rivers push me to the vast sea; the dawn brings me bright morning; my dear daddy, you help me a lot. It is you who lead me to a magnificent life. Thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. And my grateful sentiment comes from the bottom of my heart.
3.答案：
Dear Mr Wang,
I've learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanted in your company now. I'm eager to be one of them.
My name's Li Hua. I'm 21 and I'm in good health. I'm now a fourth-grade student at the physics department of Wuhan University. I'm good at all the subjects, especially computer and English. I often read science books in English and China Daily. I can talk with foreigners fluently.
I'll be very pleased if I can be accepted and I will of course work hard for the company.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4.答案：
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About two weeks later, a box of vegetables was dropped off in my office. A note was attached to the box, and it read: “To my friend, here are more delicious and healthy purple tomatoes. If you will, please come to visit my vegetable garden. You will like it.” What was totally beyond my expectation was that she went on giving me so many purple tomatoes, only as a result of my casual appreciation and desire. I shared the purple tomatoes and the moving story with my office colleagues, who also appreciated the gifts, encouraging me to accept her invitation.
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I decided to accept her invitation to visit her vegetable garden. What’s more, I desired to thank her face to face and make close friends with her in the coming days. I picked up my phone and called the telephone number on the note. After about half an hour’s drive, I came to the vegetable garden, where various vegetables ranging from tomatoes to cucumbers and green beans were planted. Seeing the garden in the soft sunshine, I felt that I had come to a natural green homeland, relaxed and delighted. “Thank you for your gifts. I am really glad to come here. ” I said to my friend. She smiled: “Thank you! I am very glad that you like them.” It was a casual greeting and kindness that brought us the precious friendship. What a surprise!
解析：续写思路 Paragraph1:本文讲述了“我”随意询问蔬菜品种,就被赠送西红柿的暖心故事。根据续文第一段提示语可知“两周后,有人在我办公室放了一箱蔬菜”,这有可能是之前的顾客送来的蔬菜,此段可写“我”收到礼物后的反应。 Paragraph2:根据续文第二段提示语可知续文第一段应有对“我”的邀请。续文第二段可主要写“我在她的菜园参观”的内容,然后可点明全文的主题“日常的问候和善意带来珍贵的友谊”。
5.答案：
Dear Van,
I’m delighted to know that you are going back to your homeland during this summer holidays and that you want to bring some gifts for your mother, which symbolize Chinese culture.
From my point of view, you can buy the following present. First, I think Chi-pao, a beautiful traditional dress for Chinese women, can show the real beauty of a woman. And I’m sure your mother will like it very much. In addition, the Chinese knot is also a nice souvenir, which is usually hung in the sitting room as a beautiful decoration. It is a symbol of good luck. I do hope it will bring your family good luck and happiness.
Have a good holiday and give my best regards to your family!
Yours,
Li Hua
6.答案：
Then a thought occurred to Aram that he could ask Mrs Rossi to teach him. "Yes, Mrs Rossi, Aram said, "I still remember the smell of the bread and cakes bought from your bakery when I was a child. It never failed to drive the misery away. How I wish I could be a baker like you. "Mrs Rossi squeezed out a smile, "But I'm old now and my fingers are no longer nimble. "What do you think of my fingers? Do you think they are fit for baking? "Aram responded carefully in a low voice. "Yes I noticed you had the perfect fingers for a baker. Then, would you please let me be your hands and restart baking?" begged Aram expectantly.
Mrs Rossi finally spoke, Let s buy the ingredients first. Seeing the ingredients, Mrs Rossi refreshed her eyes glittering with light. With Mrs Rossi’s guidance, they made a fresh start. Every day, Mrs Rossi instructed Aram about the features of each ingredient and how they work together to make the best bread and cakes. Aram buried himself in the bakery and day by day, his skills gradually improved. Two years later, the now Aram and Rossi's Bakery again has people lining up around the corner.
解析： 1.本文是一篇应用文，需要续写短文。题干中要求包含相关内容，故在文章编写时应特别注意，保证文章的完整性：
2.1）突然，阿兰姆发现了一张年轻的罗西太太的照片，她解释说这是30年前她刚从兼职的面包店回来，准备开自己的面包店时拍的。（all of a sudden突然；宾语从句）
2）于是，写了一长串购物清单后，阿兰姆和罗西太太兴奋地乘公共汽车去了最近的购物中心。（现在分词做状语）
3）他们一到那里，就开始挑选以后要用的食材。（时间状语从句）
3.文章中，结构要清晰，进行分段编写，用到连词及相关表达，使得文章有逻辑性；
4.在写作中，要注意使用复杂句型，符合该年段英语学习内容，也可尝试使用高级词汇，来增加文章亮点。
7.答案：
Dear Johnson,
I'm Li Ping from Class 6, Grade 1.I'm glad to hear that new members are wanted in the English club and I'm willing to join it.
I'm interested in English and have a good knowledge of it. Last year, I won the first prize in the English competition. Having learnt English for more than ten years, I can communicate with others in English fluently. What's more, I have some special skills, such as singing songs, telling stories and making speeches. I'm sure I can play an active part in the future activities of the society. Above all, I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working with others.
I'm looking forward to being accepted.
Yours,
Li Ping
8.答案：
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And that was exactly what happened. Mareya and I sat at the desk at the study in her house on Saturday afternoon. I asked her curiously who she would pick to talk about. “My grandma.” She blurted out. She told me she was grateful to her grandma, who took great pains to bring her up despite her poor health. From her excited look and gentle tone, I could feel her deep gratitude and love for her grandma. I was so immersed in her talk that I didn’t notice she had finished it until she patted my shoulder. She then suggested I talk about my mum. I followed her advice as I had no other good ideas. She also helped me organize my ideas and gave me patient guidance on my gestures, emotions and eye contact when practising the presentation in her presence. She was so helpful that I got prepared for my talk very smoothly.
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On Monday morning, however, I decided to talk about Mareya. Though it was true that there were many people I was grateful to, I thought it was Mareya that I should express my gratitude to here and now. When my turn came, I mustered up courage and stepped onto the platform. I couldn’t help looking at Mareya and found her smiling and cheering for me. Clearing my throat, I started, “Today, I’d like to talk about Mareya, a friend I will always be grateful to.” Hearing my words, Mareya widened her eyes and looked at me in surprise. Then I recalled good times spent with Mareya and how she managed to help me out whenever I was in trouble. Upon finishing the talk, I trotted towards Mareya and gave her a bear hug. Meanwhile, thunderous applause broke out in the classroom.
解析：
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者听说下周一要在全班同学面前讲话,谈一谈自己感激的人,作者感到非常紧张,作者的朋友Mareya安慰作者,画了一头‘一切都会好起来’的大象,并邀请作者来家里一起准备这次演讲。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“事实就是这样。”可知,第一段可描写他们在Mareya家里如何准备演讲。②由第二段首句内容“然而,周一早上,我决定谈谈玛瑞娅。”可知,第二段可描写作者的关于Mareya的演讲。2.续写线索:开始准备——听——提出建议——给......信心——安慰3.词汇激活行为类①开始准备:began preparing/start preparing②听:listen to/give ear to③提出建议:give some suggetions/put forward some suggetions④给......信心:give sb. great confidence/give sb. faith⑤安慰:comfort/console情绪类①认真地:attentively/carefully②害怕:be scared of/be afraid of【点睛】[高分句型1]She asked whom I was going to talk about and I said maybe I would talk about my father, who taught me to be strong when faced with difficulty.(由who引导的定语从句及由过去分词作状语)[高分句型2]It was she who comforted me when I was scared of the task and spared her weekend to help me prepare the talk. (强调句型和由when引导的时间状语从句)