文/刘宝彩/天津
这个标题后半部分,是一位网友提出来的,具体说的内容抄录如下:
【专四作文求助!!!!?求助!!!!写作老师说专四作文题目要“三不写”——不能写陈述句;不能写疑问句;不能写祈使句。题目要简单易懂,让别人一眼就知道你的观点。但有作文题目,如:“大学生应不应该……”,所以不用陈述句不会起题目啊,事实上,这类题目的作文已经写了三分之二个学期了。以前班里同学都是直接用陈述句表达题目:“College Students Should…/Should not...”老师都没有说不能用。结果日前上课老师突然说不能这样写啊,不能用陈述句,大家都懵了……老师只说不能这样不能那样,也没给过一个正确的例子。于是我找专四资料范文题目,每一题目都精准踩到老师的雷点。如此我已经不知道要怎么写了,矛盾啊处处是矛盾,太迷惑了。恳请大家老师教教我:观点类的英语作文题目怎么正确表述啊??】
本文作者的回答是:
这位网友,你,应该认为:你的老师之所以要求学生“不能写疑问句不能写祈使句”作为观点类的英语作文题目的格式,是因为他/她有着良苦用心的。既然是观点类英语作文,那么必然有论点和论据以及事实和理由的。与之匹配的问句一定是Why引起的句式为题目句;与此相反用“疑问句、祈使句”其回答就是yes或no,或不回答(答案已在题目中)就完事了,这样是有先天“缺陷的”。因此改进的题目(非疑问及祈使句)表述:让读者不但一眼看上去就知道你的观点而且还思考作者的论据和事实及理由。
写观点类英语作文的正确题目,一定要Why开头的句子为题目,例如:Why do you prefer your English class to be taught only in English, or in both English and Chinese?(你为什么喜欢老师授课时只用英语,还是英汉兼用呢?),所以此题目既简单易懂,又让读者看一眼就知道你的观点了?!!!而且读者还必须要看下去你写的英语作文之观点、论据和事实和理由,究竟是什么内容的。
以上,我相信:你一定解决了“不用疑问、陈述句句式起名题目”之问题了!即使以前有疑问和祈使句作为题目的,那么其后也一定跟带Why(为什么)字样的,否则也是不符合逻辑思维的,或有“先天性缺陷的”,或者说:这种表述的结果,是源于中文思维所导致的。
如果按照“Why do you prefer your English class to be taught only in English, or in both English and Chinese?”逻辑思维拟定的题目,写作英语作文,就会成功地写出英语作文如下:
Becoming efficient at learning English, most students should have English lesson taught in English by a teacher who could make him/her understood in English. So quickly do they acquire knowledge about it that they succeed in putting theory into practice by speaking English and listening to it.
This brings them with grammar proving correct in words and phrases to be put together. Compared with this, some students, whose English rests on weak foundation without ensuring suitability as a lesson-teaching-in-English program actually, ask their English teacher to give them one in Chinese that helps understand their teachers accurately.
With the agreement of all students, the English teacher should decidedly teach them English lesson both by means of English and of Chinese. This course is designed to meet the needs of them, with the atmosphere sensed in English possibly insufficiently, for short time.
During its period to spend in learning English, students would be enabled to win such great achievement as their English teacher makes in working hard at teaching them English.
By evaluating their greater progress in doing the foundation subject of English from poorly to well, the teacher will teach students English in use of the way that is likely to vary, depending on whether they are successfully taught either in both Chinese and English or in English.
Working towards a common goal in teaching them English wholly in English, the teacher helps them improve steadily in English.
从上述英语作文可以看出:
根据“Why do you prefer your English class to be taught only in English, or in both English and Chinese?(你为什么喜欢老师授课时只用英语,还是英汉兼用呢?)”题目,这篇英语作文之观点、论据和事实和理由的内容,是不是都彻彻底底地表达得一清二楚了呢?!
总结:
所以说这位网友,你,一定要跟着你的老师逻辑思维学习写作英语作文,包括写作标题,保证你一生受益的!达到了解决——得高分!学生为啥搞懂“观点类的英语作文题目 如何正确拟定?”——之问题的目的了。