医学中文文章写作技巧 (医学写作技巧学习体会分享给你)

投稿SCI是做科研的必修课,要想自己的SCI文章快速地获取编辑和审稿人的青睐,除了设计合理、逻辑严密和数据详实的内容,文章的语言也不可忽视。为避免小伙伴们在SCI论文写作过程中躺着中枪,小编为大家精心整理编译了医学SCI论文写作中常见的20例错误。

常见错误1:在首字母为元音发音的缩写词前插入不定冠词“a”。

错误解析:当缩写词的首字母的发音为五个元音字母“a, e, i ,o ,u”当中的任何一个时,应该插入不定冠词“an”。

例1:Direct measurements of each tissue were obtained usinga MRIimage.

正确写法:Direct measurements of each tissue were obtained usingan MRIimage.

例2:Should we use gloves while examininga HIVpatient?

正确写法:Should we use gloves while examiningan HIVpatient?

常见错误2:在身体部位和结构名称前不使用定冠词“the”。

错误解析:句子中出现“aorta”(主动脉)、“uterus”(子宫)等属于人身体部位和结构名词时,应当插入定冠词“the”。

例1:The region of interest was set such that it includedaorta.

正确写法:The region of interest was set such that it includedthe aorta.

例2:In this study, we performed MRIs for investigating the congenital deformities ofuterus.

正确写法:In this study, we performed MRIs for investigating the congenital deformities ofthe uterus.

需要注意的是,如果句子中连续有多个描述人身体部位和结构的名词,那么只需要在第一个名词前加the即可。如:We performed MRIs for investigating the congenital deformities ofthe uterus, ovaries, and fallopian tubes.

常见错误3:在包含数字或字母的名词前插入定冠词“the”。

错误解析:在包含字母的名词“drug A”以及包含数字的名词“Group I”和“Group II”前不能加定冠词“the”。同时,在包含数字的名词“day 3”前也不能加定冠词“the”

例1:Left ventricular function after receivingthedrug Awas significantly greater inthe Group Ithan inthe Group II.

正确写法:Left ventricular function after receivingdrug Awas significantly greater inGroup Ithan inGroup II.

例2:Liquid diet was started fromthe day 3after surgery.

正确写法:Liquid diet was started fromday 3 after surgery.

常见错误4:在文章内引用图和表格时采用过去式时态。

错误解析:在文章内涉及到表(Table)或图(Figure)时,应使用现在式时。

例1:The baseline characteristics of all the subjectsweresummarized in Table 1.

正确写法:The baseline characteristics of all the subjectsaresummarized in Table 1.

例2:Figure 4-ashowedthe relationship between age and incidence of dementia.

正确写法:Figure 4-ashowsthe relationship between age and incidence of dementia.

常见错误5:当句子中使用计量单位作为主语时使用复数动词。

错误解析:即使句子中的“milligrams”后有“s”,但是由于是计量单位应当被视为单数的集体名词,所以谓语动词应当用单数。

例1:Fifty milligrams of the pulverized crude drugweremixed with 100 mL of the solvent.

正确写法:Fifty milligramsof the pulverized crude drugwasmixed with 100 mL of the solvent.

例2:Twenty milliliters of bloodweredrawn from the affected and unaffected (control) individuals.

正确写法:Twenty millilitersof bloodwasdrawn from the affected and unaffected (control) individuals.

常见错误6:使用美式英语写正式信件的时候在称呼后面插入“,”。

错误解析:使用美式英语写正式信件的时候在称呼后面应当插入“:”,写非正式信件的时候可以插入“,”。如果使用英式英语写信件则都可以使用“,”。

例1:Dear Dr. Thomson,

正确写法:Dear Dr.Thomson:

例2:Dear Editor,

正确写法:Dear Editor:

常见错误7:使用not only…but also时在but also前插入“,”。

错误解析:在关联连词(如not only…but also,either…or,neither…nor和both…and)成对出现在一个句子中时,不能插入“,”。

例:We observed that poor drug efficiency was due tonot onlylack of absorption, but alsoincreased clearance.

正确写法:We observed that poor drug efficiency was due tonot only lack of absorptionbut alsoincreased clearance.

常见错误8:当被比较的两个事物没有被比较级形容词分开时使用短语“than that”。

错误解析:例句中被比较的“males”和“females”中间没有被比较级形容词“greater”隔开,因此不能使用“than that”,直接用“than”即可。

例1:The mean hemoglobin concentration was greater in malesthan thatin females.

正确写法:The mean hemoglobin concentration was greater in malesthanin females. 或者The mean hemoglobin concentration in males wasgreater than thatin females.

例2:The survival rates were significantly higher in the treated groupthan thosein the untreated group.

正确写法:The survival rates were significantly higher in the treated groupthanin the untreated group. 或者 The survival rates in the treated group were significantlyhigher than thosein the untreated group.

常见错误9:在句子中使用“patient was diagnosed as”。

错误解析:单词“diagnosed”是指在患者身上诊断出疾病情况,因此不能说患者被诊断为疾病,而应更改为患者被诊断出具有什么疾病。

例1:Thepatient was diagnosed asmalignant hypertension and diabetes after a battery of tests.

正确写法:Thepatient was diagnosed withmalignant hypertension and diabetes after a battery of tests. 或者 Malignant hypertension and diabeteswere diagnosed in the patient after a battery of tests.

例2:The surgical repair forpatients diagnosed asinguinal hernia was scheduled irrespective of their age or body weight.

正确写法:The surgical repair forpatients diagnosed withinguinal hernia was scheduled irrespective of their age or body weight.

常见错误10:单词“case”和“patient”混用。

错误解析:“case”是指一种疾病的实例,而“patient”意指患有疾病的人,二者不能混为一谈。

例1:We attempted to clarify the impact of the discussion and explanation by analyzing the attitude of each of the 25caseswith depression.

正确写法:We attempted to clarify the impact of the discussion and explanation by analyzing the attitude of each of the 25patientswith depression.

例2:We report apatientof cervical cancer.

正确写法:We report acaseof cervical cancer that.

常见错误11:要表达“提供一种药物或疗法”这个动作时使用动词“administrate”。

错误解析:虽然“administrate”和“administer”的名词形式相同(administration),但是“administrate”是指“管理、控制”,“administer”才是“给药、给予”的意思。

例1:Standard heparin wasadministrateddaily by continuous intravenous infusion to maintain a stable clotting time.

正确写法:Standard heparin wasadministereddaily by continuous intravenous infusion to maintain a stable clotting time.

例2:This drug isadministratedintravenously at adosage of 5 mg/day for 4-5 consecutive days.

正确写法:This drug isadministeredintravenously at a dosage of 5 mg/day for 4-5 consecutive days.

常见错误12:在句首使用数字。

错误解析:不能将数字用在句子的开头,应该将数字拼出或者调整句子结构。

例1:24patients were assigned to receive radiotherapy and 30 to receive a combination of radio- and chemotherapy.

正确写法:Twenty-fourpatients were assigned to receive radiotherapy and 30 to receive a combination of radio- and chemotherapy.或者 A total of24and 30 patients were assigned to receive radiotherapy and a combination of radio- and chemotherapy, respectively.

例2:60%of the enrolled subjects continued their participation until the end of the study.

正确写法:Sixty percentof the enrolled subjects continued their participation until the end of the study.

常见错 误13:一个句子中数字的书写格式不一致。

错误解析:在句子中多次出现数字时应统一书写格式。

例1:We classified sleep events into26sleep attacks,foursleep episodes, andtwenty-threesleep events not other wise classified.

正确写法:We classified sleep events into26sleep attacks,4sleep episodes, and23sleep events not other wise classified.

例2:The sample group consisted ofnineteenagers,sixmiddle-aged members, and8senior citizens.

正确写法:The sample group consisted of9teenagers,6middle-aged members, and8senior citizens.

常见错误14:在数字与其相应的单位中间或者在数*运学**算符前后不插入空格。

错误解析:在数字与其相应的单位之间应该插入空格,但百分号(%)除外,如30%。另外,在数*运学**算符“±”前后应插入空格。

例1:The body weight of the Beagles ranged between5kgand10kg;their average body weight was7.5kg.

正确写法:The body weight of the Beagles ranged between5 kgand10kg;their average body weight was7.5 kg.

例2:Of the 91 participants (average age60±5 years),51 and 40 were divided into 2 groups based on their response to the drug.

正确写法:Of the 91 participants (average age60 ± 5 years), 51 and 40 were divided into 2 groups based on their response to the drug.

常见错 误15:在一个句子中单位的书写格式不一致。

错误解析:在一个句子中单位的格式应统一。

例1:To exclude such a possibility, oxygen saturations were measured every30 minover a period of4 hours.

正确写法:To exclude such a possibility, oxygen saturations were measured every30 minover a period of4 h.

例2:Two mLof this solution was added to the mixture.

正确写法:Two millilitersof this solution was added to themixture.

常见错误16:单位的书写格式错误。

错误解析:在一个单位中不能使用多次“/”,如有多个分母,应用“·”连接。

例1:The patient was administered70 mg/m2/hcisplatin.

正确写法:The patient was administered70 mg· m-2·h-1 cisplatin. 或者 The patient was administered70 mg/(m2·h) cisplatin.

例2:Constant air flow at45 mL/min/Lwas provided from the bottom of the fermenter.

正确写法:Constant air flow at45mL·min-1·L-1was provided from the bottom of the fermenter. 或者Constant air flow at45 mL/(min·L)was provided from the bottom of the fermenter.

常见错误17:在使用百分数表达范围时不重复使用“%”。

错误解析:注意数字与%之间不需要插入空格。

例1:The range of annual incidence rates of URTI was0.4-1.9%.

正确写法:The range of annual incidence rates of URTI was0.4%-1.9%.

例2:Approximately60.0, 14.3, and16.7%patients in Groups A, B, and C, respectively, showed significant improvement.

正确写法:Approximately60.0%, 14.3%,and 16.7%patients in Groups A, B, and C, respectively, showed significant improvement.

常见错误18:将乘号“×”用英文字母“X”代替。

例1:The equation for estimating this value is A = 3.56x10-2 γ [a + b].

正确写法:The equation for estimating this value is A = 3.56×10-2 γ [a + b].

例2:The resected liver mass measured 1x1x0.15mm.

正确写法:The resected liver mass measured 1×1×0.15 mm.

常见错误19:日期格式书写错误。

例1:Between1st January 2001andDecember 31st2003, 2176 patients underwent surgical operation and were pathologically proven to have breast cancer.

正确写法:

Day/month/year(英式英语)模式:Between1 January 2001and31 December 2003, 2176 patients underwent surgical operation and were pathologically proven to have breast cancer.

Month/day/year(美式英语)格式:BetweenJanuary 1, 2001andDecember 31, 2003, 2176 patients underwent surgical operation and were pathologically proven to have breast cancer. 注意在使用Month/day/year(美式英语)格式时,需要在day与year之间插入“,”。

例2:All 37 patients were followed-up fromJanuary, 2000toDecember, 2004.

正确写法:All 37 patients were followed-up fromJanuary 2000toDecember 2004.

常见错误20:在特定的日期前使用介词“at”。

错误解析:在特定的日期前应使用介词“on”。

例1:Graft rejection was observedatdays 215 and 265.

正确写法:Graft rejection was observedondays 215 and 265.

例2:Significant recovery was noticedatday 7, and the patient was dischargedatday 12 of admission.

正确写法:Significant recovery was noticedonday 7, and the patient was dischargedonday 12 of admission.

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