文/刘宝彩/天津
按照“新高考英语课标”写作英语质量和方法的要求，妙！高考写作英语，手握主动权，不会干瞪眼，创新思想足够，方法质量优；给大考学生写一篇英语作文——以“节约×××”为题，请你以李华名义写一篇英文邮件投稿，谈谈关于生活中浪费时间、食物、资源（任选其一）等问题看法，为此你要说明为什么及如何节约它或你想到的…观点。可能用到的词语提示：resources（资源）；waste（浪费）；food/dishes（食物）；population（人口）；garbage container（垃圾桶）
这篇高考英语作文是按照“新高考英语课标”写作质量和方法的要求写作的。以下是正式英文写作如下
Dear Editors from English Club,
I thank you for your letter to all students in our school asking them for discussion on the topic about saving one of kinds: time, food and resources.
The above topic is interesting to me, helping find it important for everyone to have food/dishes made available to them. Food enables Chinese society to keep sufficiently stable and develop for security. That results from China’s population reached a little more than 1.4 billion according to statistics authorities of China in 20--.
China as largest-population country in the world needs consuming food so much that, kept alive, people eat and drink to live life normally.
They live on food and dishes that are to serve to them, eaters, who should fulfil morally mutual obligation to follow basic rules and regulations. Thinking about these, food-eating everyone is requested to take as properly much as one eats in need when having meal.
This is considered as being moral, economical and political or legal problem. Combining with this, some of its eaters throw food/dishes down after meal which they regard as being without eating. It means food/dishes were not put in their mouth or bag, to be taken home, but in garbage container immorally. That shows personal and social economy suffers shortages comparatively. This action makes it impossible for the others to take opportunity of enjoy eating in their lives, to which to become harmful politically.
To prevent food-related waste from increasing in resources, I would air my voice on fighting off the right-to-life challenge facing people. Legally, I consider it right of food wasters to be treated like common criminal, as per new law to be made by drawing up food-wasting draft as shall be approved of in past time.
Above-said points prove suitable for China so perfectly that food may remain adequate for supplies in China, needing importing from foreign countries years. This time sees China-achieved solutions to food that helps save necessarily for Chinese people, standing by saving the world where China becomes largest in population.
上述英语作文可以看出：考生用自己的思想写作出英语作文，便满足了学生考生思想是各不相同的写英语作文的要求——内容和形式完美地结合起来的英语作文会让判卷老师看到：作文具有思维能力、思辨能力、认知能力，给学生得高分甚至满分。对英语学习者语言能力、文化意识、思维质量，充满工具性和人文性融合为一体的享受。达到如下五个结果。
1.发散思维证明丰厚；2.作文审题不会漏，论据过渡也不丢，观念逻辑跑不走；3.各类英语写作学习者有了写作新思路；4.运用“5.38”句各自和彼此组合，再与“2.70”逻辑联系而构成的英语句数量，大概达5万多个。由此摆脱“写英语没词儿写，有了词儿不知怎么写”的困惑。这种自创新英文，你想写多少篇不重样英语作文，就能写出多少篇，具有时效性、快乐性、欣赏性；5.写英语——不靠“模板”靠逻辑，永久解决“不知写啥”的问题，因为一个标题/观念可以选择的理由与证据和形式多样，不同的人会从不同视角分析和论证，靠的就是，寻逻辑找思维写英语。
这样做到：词语句子藏逻辑，短语符号显优势；缘由成果推理棒、思路过渡皆通畅、内容证明皆恰当。苦练英语思维内功，谋逻辑英语写作前进，凝心聚力写优良英语新华章；逻辑思维显“威力”。
威力依照三招数：“①缘由←②提示观念→③成果”思路而写出英语作文，因而以提示观念为中心，左找缘由，右找成果。这样让写作者便“有词儿写，有词儿晓得怎么写”，具有意思不重复，英文语言表达有新鲜感，大考判卷教师对此有吸引力给高分！达到了英语写作高分思维的“三招数”之成果。
总结：
这篇英语作文，显现考生写英语作文符合“新高考课标”思想要求，适应了英文写作内容、题材和体裁，便正确地“套住”了大考英语写作要求。用逻辑思维推理，这篇英语写作内容的含义和观点，让写作英语的考生较好地写出自己逻辑思维之灵魂思想性和人的情感性。
当然，解决了“妙！高考写作英语，手握主动权，不会干瞪眼 创新思想足够，方法质量优”之价值了。证实标题——大考英语“战场”怎么“打败”低分模板写英语而赢得高分，成功了！