文/刘宝彩/天津
之所以写这个标题是看到如下英语作文：
Let me tell you something about the supermarkets near our school. Yongxing Supermarket is large and it has all kinds of things. It is the closest to our school.
But students hardly ever shop there because things are pretty expensive. Tiny Supermarket is the cheapest. However, it is a little far from our school and the service is the worst. Xinhua Supermarket is more popular than the other two.
It has the best service and the food is both fresh and cheap. I think Xinhua Supermarket is the best of the three. I hope you’ll enjoy shopping there.
说上述英语写作是中式英语写作，是因为它的逻辑思维是“断层”的，也就是说，中文怎么思考，英语就怎么写，这样中文思维是用英语单词来表达了。
按照写作已知条件：提示：1. Things；2. Price；3. Service；4. Distance (距离)；假设你是李华，新同学Lily向你询问学校附近是否有大型超市。请你写一篇短文，从几个超市作比较，并给她推荐一家最便利的超市，这样用“原汁原味”中文=英文，来写作英语作文的。无疑，新一波低分的中式思维英语写作隆重登场；没有达到“语言通顺，行文连贯”的要求。这样没有英语逻辑思维渗透这篇英语作文中。
所以如逻辑思维让学生写作英语得到很好的思考，那么可以提供两个有效的工具：㈠ 探讨人的交往和社会现象的若干话题；㈡ 输出有逻辑性理念，展开英语思维的表达思想。在探讨社会现象和人的交往方面，学生们就已知写作材料及其来源话题，从逻辑角度，进行提问和回答。逻辑思维英语作文是按照“原因←提示观点→结果”理论思路写英语，为此以“看微信的影响（WE-CHAT-watching influence）”为题，写作英语作文如下：
At recent-year time, WECHAT plays an important role in our daily life, that enables most people not to come to an agreement on whether WECHAT is both advantageous and disadvantageous to children.
The latter forces some of them to find it harmful to children as students who continue watching WECHAT to become negative about acquiring cultural-lesson knowledge, together with about potentially healthy growth.
By watching WECHAT properly for relaxation, younger people could fall their pressure on course-taking life so well that they may consider how WECHAT would be mentally and intellectually beneficial to them.
Some WECHAT programs remain true with important and interesting to them, turning some students favourable to receiving excellent education I regarded as advisable day by day when, comparing with books and textbooks, WECHAT program always is in line with the latest event and information. This is easy to assist students in keeping well-informed about what is new in daily life, and giving a up-to-date outlook on the world-wide life.
This tells people that WE-CHAT-watching is too excessive to maintain physical fitness, leading to students’ eye-sights falling. This fact comes from that they could spend a lot time watching WECHAT by lying down sofa, meaning without participating in physical exercises, they would have put on more than average fatness to suffer from disease, possibly.
That enables them to fill with a sense of the self-confidence loss on overweight. Compared with this, WE-CHAT-watching excess turns children/students negative about effects on academic development, having something colorful to present clean-cut images on mobile-phone screen and produce such a pleasant-sound effect as is made attractive to students.
WE-CHAT-watching students or children have been got favourable to widening scope of knowledge and information as well as keeping pace tightly with up-to-date world. This avoids looking poor for progress on their study.
这篇英语逻辑思维写的作文是依据条件——Some people think it is all bad for children to watch WECHAT, others believe watching WECHAT can bring positive effects on children when they grow up. Discuss both and give your opinion——写的。
上述英语逻辑思维作文：对逻辑的挖掘或展开的过程，既鼓舞学生们对自己学习越来越有责任，又鼓舞学生们作为独立的和自我纠错者得到认知和智慧的发展。学生们在智力和勇气上得到了发展。
总结：
从上述英语作文可以看出：思维内容与思维形式各种技能、表述和标准及其衡量紧扣关键点、作出若干对比、找出各种关联、识别正误，提出和接受合理性、作出正面负面的推断等，全面（fully）有益（usefully）地开拓视野看到前景。因此清晰地阐述“逻辑思维的星星等待学生写作英语高分升起的太阳”之原理。
逻辑思维英语作文是按照“原因←提示观点→结果”理论思路写英语的，具体操作步骤：以提示观点为中心，左找原因，右找结果，达到英语思维逻辑写作之目的，实际上是由四个部分构成。
1说出主题；2主题产生的原因；3主题产生的结果；4达到这种结果应该采取什么措施，这四个问题阐述清楚了，就OK了。其表达形式是“2原因←1主题→3结果→4措施”这就是英语思维逻辑写作思考的具体内容。只有这样才能阻止：新一波低分的中式思维英语写作隆重登场。