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雅思托福10多年一线教学
中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫
在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货
每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，我们来解读 2022年1月10日澳洲阿德莱德的雅思大作文真题 。老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
- 题目改写
- 观点类大作文高分句型
- 展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
- 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
6，雅思写作大礼包(3.0版，大作文51页，小作文34页)
- 高分范文
- 必备句型
- 写作技巧
- 考前急救包
上题：
Too much emphasis is put on education for the young and that government should invest more money on free-time activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题：
- Type : Opinion 观点类大作文 (Depends, but partially agree)
- Body 1 : educating the young is important and should have priority, but some nations place too much emphasis, and others not enough.
- Body 2 : Nevertheless, free-time activities are important. Promotion of extra-curricular activities that teach both skills and teamwork
- Key words : too much/should
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
22.1.10阿德莱德雅思大作文真题| 教育投资 vs 课外活动 (母语教师范文+朗读+词汇中英)
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There are some that believe too much prominence is given to educating youngsters and that the authorities should allocate more funds on extra-curricular activities. In my opinion, I only partially agree with this viewpoint, as it depends on a country’s education system ; nevertheless, investing in free-time activities is important.
One of the most important aspects of life for any society should be the education of the young ; however, some nations, it could be said, spend too much time on this critical pursuit , while others spend too little . For those countries where education and academic results are highly prized , such as in South Korea and other Asian countries, the re is little doubt among psychologists that children from these societies should be given more free time to play, learn new hobbies, and take part in activities that build skills and teamwork. In other countries , such as Australia and the United States, comparative analysis and even economic data , reveals these nations are underperforming academically , and so it seems greater time and resources should be funneled towards the education of this demographic .
Regard less of wh ich society is referred to however , it seems clear that governments should invest more in building infrastructure that allows the young to nurture their non-academic abilities . As such, there are likely never enough recreation facilities, club houses, sport leagues, athletic fields , and other such facilities and organizations that can help develop the young into well-rounded citizens . While play is important for relaxation and for creating a healthy imagination and apt social skills , children should also have the opportunity to play sports and indulge their curiosity in safe and organized facilities , places for which require government funding . Nevertheless, a balance needs to be struck between education and that of allowing youngsters the opportunity to enjoy the pursuit of non-academic interests , with education still receiving priority.
In conclusion, in my opinion, it seems apparent that some societies place too much emphasis on education for the young , while others place too little significance , but regardless of the nation in question , it also seems clear that all countries should spend more funds on creating infrastructure that is conducive to a child’s healthy development .
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction -
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：
- emphasis = prominence
- is put on = is given to
- education = educating
- the young = youngsters
- government = the authorities
- invest money = allocate funds
- free- time activities = extra-curricular activities
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文通用句型：
- There are some that believe
- In my opinion, I only partially agree with this viewpoint
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- and that
- , as it
- ; nevertheless
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
- prominence 重要性；突出
- allocate 分派；配置
- extra-curricular 课外的
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这一段需要提的点: Too much emphasis is put on education for the young—depends where.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- One of the most important aspects of
- there is little doubt
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- highly prized 备受青睐；非常珍贵
- psychologists 心理学家
- comparative analysis 对比分析
- economic data 经济数据
- underperforming academically 学术上表现不佳
- funneled towards 倾向于；集中到
- demographic 人口
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- ; however,
- some
- , it could be said,
- too much time
- this
- , while others
- too little
- For those
- where
- and
- , such as in
- and other
- , there
- that
- these
- more
- In other
- , such as
- even
- , and so it seems
- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这一段需要提的点：government should invest more money on free-time activities—agree but education still priority.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- Regardless of which ___ however,
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- building infrastructure 打造基础设施
- to nurture 培养
- non-academic abilities 非学术方面的能力
- recreation facilities 娱乐设施
- club houses 俱乐部
- sport leagues 体育联盟
- athletic fields 运动场
- develop the young into well-rounded citizens 培养全面发展的公民
- a healthy imagination 健康的想象力
- apt social skills 良好的社交技巧
- have the opportunity to 有机会……
- indulge ___ curiosity 满足好奇心
- government funding 政府资助
- a balance needs to be struck between 打破平衡
- and that of allowing
- the opportunity to
- the pursuit of 追求
- non-academic interests 非学术的兴趣爱好
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- Regardless of which
- however,
- , it
- that
- their
- As such, there
- , and other such
- While
- also
- , places for which
- Nevertheless,
- , with
- still
- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
- In conclusion,
- In my opinion
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
- apparent 明显的
- place too much emphasis on 过于重视
- significance 重要性；意义
- but regardless of 不管；无论
- conducive to 有益于
- a child’s healthy development 儿童的健康发展
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
- it
- that
- some
- , while others
- , but regardless of
- , it also
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