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以标题为主题思想，一个即将“小升初”的小学生写作一篇未来庆“六.一”儿童节的英语作文如下，对中高考生有借鉴现实操作意义。
In the sixth Children’s Day of mine, unfortunately, I did not spend its time well having in primary school. Its time is enough for me not to do this but to study lessons. Nobody is to know about this. I was getting ready for examination of the high-school entrance.
My parents would like me to have this Children’s Day in the coming days by going on our trip to countries in the world. They are Egypt, south America and Brazil, etc. And I am also going to visit Arctic in summer holiday, if possibly.
In Egypt（埃及）, I together with my parents will be pleased to visit Egyptian pyramids（金字塔）. Within them is precious treasure looking mysteriously ancient culture. That is quite much interesting to me.
In south America and Brazil（巴西） is Amazon（亚马逊）. There I want to visit the wild animal and to ride an elepant on a tour of the jungle（丛林）.
In Arctic（北极）, I will spend some time staying to my pleasure summer holiday. There I enjoy skating on ice and snow, going fishing and playing with penguins（企鹅）. This helps me learn skills for survival in the wild.
How greatly it would be to hope these dreams come true. I find a truth in getting my everyday of happy value to me greatly, when I am grown up. I believe in making every experience educational. This tells me what’s “no pain, no gain” in my heart.
上述英语作文大意如下
过第六个儿童节，很遗憾，我由于小升初没有时间过节了，而有时间用于学习中，所以爸妈给我规划好了以后有时间补过属于我自己的儿童节就是了：⑴去国外旅游参观令我十分感兴趣且最吸引我的古老文明而又神秘的埃及金字塔，看看里面珍藏的宝藏；⑵去亚马逊从林探险，想观察那些地区野兽，还想骑在大笨象身上，在丛林里游览；⑶去十分好玩的北极冰天雪地溜冰、钓鱼跟企鹅玩…通过这些活动，我可以学到野外生存的技能，希望这些梦想成真，该有多好啊!
这样我明白了一个道理：我已不是儿童而长大了，一定要让属于自己的快乐的每一天过得充实而有意义!我相信，每一次经历都能让我成长，所以会告诉我心中究竟什么是“一分耕耘，一分收获”。
从上述英语作文可以看出：
小学生眼中的世界是美好的，美好让生命有了意义，所以生活很精彩。要怎么活着，由自己做主；在前行的路上，始终怀揣希望和梦想都值得歌颂。这让阳光温暖人们的心。相信，每一次经历都能让学生成长。注意到其信念是前路迷茫时，依然迈出的第一步。
（The world is a beautiful place for a student together with for his/her parents. This is what makes life worth living. The life is amazing. They get to decide how he/she should live．And they must always travel in hope. I should sing them a song for their dream. That seems to notice that the sun keeps them warm in heart. I believe in making every experience educational. Faith is taking the first step when you can’t see the staircase.）
总结：
这篇“高分 中高考生借鉴小学写英语作文：儿童节享受精神快乐获生命意义”的小学生写作的英语作文，实际上就是“聚沙成塔、厚积薄发”的结果。例如，小学学习的至少十五英语句型：
⑴spend some time staying; ⑵get ready for; ⑶like me to have; ⑷going on our trip to countries; ⑸would like me to have this Children’s Day by doing...；⑹be going to visit; ⑺be pleased to visit; ⑻be quite much interesting to me; ⑼want to ride an elepant; ⑽enjoy skating on ice and snow; ⑾going fishing; ⑿helps me learn skills; ⒀How greatly it would be to hope; ⒁make every experience educational; ⒂This tells me what’s...在上述英语作文中都使用上了。
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