文/刘宝彩/天津
为什么学生考生写英语作文总是显得平淡没有思想呢?甚至还显得空洞有喊口号的“味道”,费力不小写作几乎无效,自己写着累,别人还觉得写得不好。告诉你,你缺的不是表现力,而是英语作文写作的三个常规的表达力。今天我要告诉学生写英语作文富有英语逻辑思维的三个常规,当你明确了并且会运用它,再笨的脑子也可以做到得高分。今天你听明白了,你想写什么英语作文,保证你就立竿见影写出,不信试一下你就知道了,表现不够规矩来凑。
第一常规,就是你表达主题思想写作的每一个句子时,一定要尽量抓住逻辑思维规定的单句,你来看这一句“The weather has become warmer”,而不是写成“The weather is warmer”来很呆板的句子。那我们在写单句的时候,你要抓住他的强“活力”。
第二常规,就是你在写每个逻辑单句(如三个句1. Spring draws near. 2.the weather has become warmer. 3.That inspires quite a few people to go out of houses for sunshine.)的之间,一定要明确有“换气的气口”就是上下句有一个逻辑联系的“把手”,例如:Spring drawing near, the weather has become warmer. That inspires quite a few people to go out of houses for sunshine.的组句:其中之一Spring drawing near独立主格被看做“把手(…drawing…)”表达为“因为(春天)来临”;其中之二,That…表达“所以”之意。当然了,多数情况下基本上是一句一个气口,体会一下把这三句连起来,你就成功写出了一个英语逻辑组句了,所以绝对没有“逻辑跳空缺口”
这气口你在练习写英语作文的时候一定要明确,不能可有可无啊,不能这边写作的有,那边写的就没有,这样情况下你的“气口”的惯性就容易乱。
写作句子如稍微长一点点,所以你要控制好自己的气息,也可以临时加上一个“气口”,我说的临时加气口并不是随意加,而是有控制的直接把一个逻辑句能顺利地连接到你的下一个句子的逻辑位置上。
第三常规,就是在英语作文写作时,我们往往要在逻辑组句中加一些“装饰”词或短语,或者组句本身就有,那你在写作的时候要把它与你所加的装饰,必须匹配。不要吃“意思”,也就是中间不要阻思维断含义,正因为有了这些个小装饰,才显得这篇作文儿非常的优美,例如:Enabled to develop physically, she is in good health, being full of highly spirit in doing something she could difficultly. 因此你绝对不要把装饰省略掉,或者在写组句的时候想写却没有表现出来,要把它写全,否则自己写着不舒服,别人看着也不好看,就因为这些细节没有做到。
你再体会一下,把这三个常规都做进去:1逻辑思维规定的单句;2每个逻辑单句之间有“换气的气口”;3逻辑组句中加一些“装饰”词或短语。
为你写英语思维作文有开心喜悦的一天,给你写一篇英语思维作文如下:
Having a lot learned during a lesson class by teaching as known to most people, some students or teachers are loath to get this teaching method used in traditionally-teaching way.
As indicated in the way, Learning by listening only gives passive input to students, which is seen as useless or ineffective by people. In comparison to this, learning by discussing and teaching is regarded as active input, which will be effectually helpful to the students, who do activities with lesson-class study to meet their desires to have method changed from passive input to active input by which to apply the knowledge completely they acquired.
By the passive input, two years ago, I mean I had lessons received to get very low scores during the pandemic-hitting period, which extremely made me look morose and distressed. In compliance with this, I hold expectation of quite a common occurrence in students, but, fortunately, my friend and acquaintance advised me to learn by its discussing, which methodology is called the well-known Feynman Technique admitted by an abundance of the professors.
I just had its approach used according to my friend, helping me acquire the knowledge internally by following logic, to get my effectively-learning wish fulfilled successfully by taking up the methodological study.
A small number of people, the adolescents in school, can follow the teachers in realizing how they come to learn all in principle during a lesson class. That is to say most students do need the guidance with which to help them. For example, in comparison to this, seminars and/or discussions will turn more effectively favourable to university students, in my view.
In conclusion, I highly became exposed to the way how students can more effectively have knowledge of lesson taken by its teaching and discussing, that is positively perceptible to me.
上述英语作文是依据以下条件写的
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is typical that teachers lecture or lead the discussions and students listen and take notes for the most of the time of a class.
There is a better way that teachers organize student-led discussions and project-based learning, and can give help when students need it.
总结:
看到以上三个规矩及其英语托福写作,那你觉得英语作文写得优美吗?不管你现在在练习某一主题写作,还是读后续写,把我今天讲的这三个常规运用上,它一定会让你的英语写作富有表现力。当然,让写英语富有表现力和这三个常规应用上,也需要你的语法、思维及其思想从不同角度表达的几个方面的综合运用。
那如果你在写作英语方面还欠缺基础,没有练过又不懂,又不想花费太多的时间,就请你订阅我的写英语专栏,从作文写作的主题观点运用、写作的词法句法以及写作思想上的推理和情感表达,通过几节课一站式的为自己打下一个很好的良好的写作英语思维作文的基础,让自己的英语作文写得更轻松,使自己的英语作文更好地吸引读者。我是刘老师,其实认为:高分足够规矩凑;爽了!300字英语思维托福作文写得优秀会比较快。