- 基础网课：Simon Courses，言简意赅，课程短无压力，做好做笔记
- 素材：Simon大小作文范文，Simon观点库
- 练习步骤：
一、正常备考版，可冲6.5/7.0（30天计划）：
Firstly，（10天结束课程，小作文2-3天，大作7-8天，可以压缩）看课程，了解大小作文基本框架结构和写作要点；
Secondly，（10天结束，大小作文各5篇左右，这一步可以压缩）把Simon的范文翻译成中文，对照中文自己翻译成英语，然后对比错词行文的差距，积累朴素好用的公式句和连接词，不要太多，有6个左右能够训练到使用自如即可；
Thirdly，（10天准备），结合观点库梳理发散角度，准备4个角度，6个观点延伸方向，根据剑雅真题写，每天一大一小，可以找批改。
二、救命冲刺版，为保底6分（1-5天）
Firstly（1h），最关键的还是框架，先了解大小作文的分段框架和每一段的写作时间（见图）
Secondly，（2h）看2篇范文（看看猪是怎么跑的），记住4个万能角度，6个观点延伸（见图）
Thirdly，（4h）记忆自己记得住的框架模板和连接词（见图）
Finally，有条件可以模拟写一篇大小作文，没条件直接考场模拟
三、写作任务回应（Task Response，简称TR）是决定作文是5.5还是6.0+的首要部分，因此请准确回应各部分写作任务，不要自己发挥，下面对号入座最常见的4个题型：
- 询问观点：to what extent……agree或者不agree类，观点可以一边倒写同意（一个理由一段，推荐这个写法），也可以两边都写（一段对方理由，一段己方理由，不推荐）
- 讨论问题：discuss both these views and give your own opinon类，必须写两边，先写支撑对方观点部分（选不痛不痒的两个因素，留下驳斥点），再写自己的观点（能驳斥前一段）
- 问题解决：what problems 会存在？suggest some measures 来解决类，必须回答两个问题，先指出问题，再给出解决方案
- 利弊分析：do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?你觉得是好是坏？
四、模板部分
我裸考了3次，都是6.0，对糊弄*法大**有些心得
此篇专克大作文考题，考前30分钟看都有效！！零练习保6，有准备可上6.5
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询问观点类 |
to what extent……agree or disagree |
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讨论问题类 |
discuss both these views and give your own opinon |
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问题解决类 |
What problems will this cause? Suggest some measures |
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利弊分析 |
do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? |
问题解决模板
题目：In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
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首段（2句话）
- 改写题目、同义替换，描述现象：It is true that …
- 切题表达尽管有问题，但可以解决：Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, 行动主体 can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
主体段一（2-3点影响，5-8句话）
- 主旨句：As…重复现象, several related problems can be anticipated.
- 第一个问题，要解释或举例，The main issue is that there will be …. For example, ….
- 第二个问题，要解释或举例，Another problems is that ….
- 段落总结，Finally,…/As a result …
主体段二（2-3个解决方案，5-8句话）
- 主旨句：There are several actions that 行动主体 could take to solve the problems described above.
- 第一个解决，要解释或举例：Firstly, a simple solution would be to ….
- 第二个解决，要解释或举例：A second measure would be for 行动主体 to encourage immigration in order to ….
- 第三个解决，要解释或举例：Finally, ….
第四段（1句话），回去点题，强调看法
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that ….
Simon 9分范文
题目：In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.（老龄化影响和解决方法）
It is true that （改写题目）people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, （行动主体）societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
（主旨句点明问题）As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be （第一个问题：钱—养老金）more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. （展开解释，利用主体对比）The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population.（继续展开） In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for （第二个问题：健康—医疗保障）healthcare, （展开）and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.
（主旨句表明解决方案）There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. （第一个解决）Firstly, a simple solution would be to （退休年龄）increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. （展开理由）Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. （第二个解决）A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes（人口—税收）. （第三个解决）Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.（政府财政）
（结论，点题）In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are
certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.discuss模板
题目：Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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首段：（2句话）
- 改写题目、点明核心议题：People have different views about whether ….
- 提出自己观点：In my view, ….
主体段一，反方观点站住脚的理由（2点理由，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句：There are two main reasons why it could be argued that ….
- 第一个理由：Firstly,（展开说明或举例）
- 第二个理由：Secondly,（展开说明或举例）
- 段落结尾：This means that ….
主体段二,转折过渡到己方观点（2点理由，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句：However, I would agree with those who believe that ….
- 第一个理由：My first reason is that …. 展开说明或举例）
- 第二个理由：Apart from that，…. （展开说明或举例）
- D段落结尾：Finally, ….
第四段（1句话），回去点题，强调看法
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that …, my own view is that….
Simon 9分范文
题目：Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
（改写题目）People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. （提出观点）In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.
（反方观点，核心句）There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. （分列第一点理由）Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. （举例）For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. （解释）Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage.（第二点理由） Secondly, peopleseem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. （段落总结）This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.
（转折引入己方观点）However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. （展开第一点）In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. （解释）We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. （举例）For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. （展开第二点）Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.
（结论）In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.Agree/disagree 模板
题目：We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this statement?
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首段：（2句话）
- 改写题目、点明核心议题：Some people believe that ….
- 提出自己观点：I agree/disagree with this view because I believe that ….
主体段一，反方观点（2-3点原因，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句，让步对方观点可取之处：On the one hand, there are several reasons why I accept that it is important to ….
- 第一个理由：Firstly, ….（解释或举例）
- 第二个理由：Secondly，….（解释或举例）
- 段落结尾，I can understand why some people feel that ….
主体段二（2-3点原因，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句，切换己方观点：At the same time, I believe that ….
- 第一个理由：直接陈述，For example ….
- 第二个理由：Also, …（解释或举例）
- 段落结尾：… have a much greater impact on …
第四段（1句话），回去点题，强调看法
In conclusion, it is true that …, but in my opinion ….
Simon 9分范文
题目：We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this statement?
（改写题干）Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society.（提出观点） I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.
（反方观点）On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. （理由）In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. （解释）It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people.（举例） In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. （段落结尾）As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.
（过渡到己方观点）At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. （理由）In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. （举例）For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. （段落结尾）A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.
（结论句）In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.利弊分析模板
题目：Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
首段：（2句话）
- 第一句改写题目：Nowadays, it is a noticeable phenomenon that….
- 第二句提出观点：While I accept that … have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.（positive/negative可以换过来）
主体段一，先写反方观点（2-3点优缺点，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句：On the one hand, … can be both ….
- 第一个优缺点：One of the advantages/disadvantages is that ….（解释或者举例）
- 第二个优缺点：Another benefit/problem is that ….（解释或者举例）
- 段落结尾：Finally，….
主体段二，己方观点（2-3个优缺点，5-8句话）
- 段落中心句：However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.（可以根据观点交换两个关键词）
- 第一个优缺点：Firstly, …. （解释或者举例）
- 第二个优缺点：Secondly, …. （解释或者举例）
第四段（1句话），回去点题，强调看法
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of … are more significant than the possible benefits.
Simon 9分范文
题目：Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
（改写题目）Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. （提出观点）While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.
（先写让步观点）On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. （解释）Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes.（进一步展开） From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, （优点）all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. （连接词，第二个优点）Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world tasks, such as flying a plane.
（过渡己方观点）However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. （解释）Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. （展开）Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. （解释）This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. （段落结尾）The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
（结论句）In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.